A comment you made was that you were unsure on what I was writing about which I don’t understand because throughout my paper I kept saying that writing should be a form of self expression. I’m not sure what further you want me to say about it I think I’ve said all I can about it. 

Three patterns of comments that you’ve made is that you’re unsure of my goals in the paper, that I repeat the segments in my reflection and I need to connect my points back to the overall thesis of my paper.